Saturday, May 12, 2007

....dragonflies are born the same day they die...

i'll remember it like that
like the speed of their wings
hovering instant life
and gone
just as fast


Mac said...


I love to open-endedness that the ellipsis give the first part, how it makes the rest of the poem like a dream. Instant and blinding.

Lilly said...

Well thanks Mac! I fully appreciate that...comments from you are taken in and digested compleatly by me...