Rattling Windows and Buckets of Hope
okay so here we go
feeble be it may
dreaming last night
your giant bed
drowning in the down comforter
and out the giant double windows
the city at night lit up and dreaming
strolling through vivid half awake semi-sleep hallucinations
and I am dreaming,
of a strange neighbor of yours
from across the hall
who keeps barging in
and milling about
in your apartment
then (in this dream)
you have to drive me
to the airport
to go back to Jersey
but that's completely irrelevent
now awake 11:30am
in your Russian Hill abode
on top of the world
you've left for a meeting
and golfing
and i'm on the balcony smoking
and someone starts knocking
and it's your landlord or something
and now there are all these people here
measuring the 80 million windows
in you living room
that provide the panoramic view
of our city San Francisco
and in the bedrooms
and accidentally in the bathroom
they're just milling about your apartment
with a tape measure
and i wouldn't have answered the door
if i hadn't thought it was you
forgetting something
and i wouldn't have let them in
but they seemed to be of authority
I mean, he was dressed like a Rabi
and lately i've been
contemplating religion
3 comments:
I can see all of this...
::le sigh::
god, how I miss my beautiful city and those who live there that I so dearly love.
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I love the turn around at the end. Great use of details. I the poem could have done without the first stanza. It comes off like a stutter. And in the middle, don't tell me what's irrelevant.
Other than that it's great.
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